Pearl Harbor Animation ( Click for the link )
After watching the previous submission for this module, I did notice a lot of aspects that could have been improved throughout.
It is clearly seen than this group of people studied the historic event in detail from the naration that is played over the animation sequence. However, the naration itself is not as appealing to the ear as you would expect; there is no emphasis on any words/sentences and the voice is very monotone.
Another criticism I have about this animation sequence, are the explosions and use of smoke that are included. I noticed that when bombs impact the buildings, the animator has used the explosion tool so they shatter into triangular pieces, but I think that they could have created a better and more realistic effect.
In the first few paragraphs I have been very critical of this animation, but there are also quite a few positives as well. The models used in the sequence are very well produced and the planes for example include a fair amount of detail.
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